Peter Wick's blog SIMPLE DISPLEASURES will appear the 15th of each month, except August and December.
Saturday, July 13, 2024
127 - President Lenny The Rock
Friday, June 14, 2024
126 - Final Sneak Peek - Death and Saxophones -The Introduction
[Note: This will be the last Sneak Peek from the Deatn and Saxophones book. It is the Introduction from the published book. Enjoy! P.W.]
I have been pleasantly surprised, over the years, at how many readers my Simple Displeasures blog has found. Blogs, In general, are hardly at the center of the current zeitgeist the way, say, TikTok dance videos are. This blog, though, has played an important role in my own sense of well-being, and the fact that it finds a few thousand readers each month is a happy bonus.
I have not included every post. The previous collection, Funny Sexy Nanobots – and other improvements, included posts through the end of 2016 (plus previously written short things, and a 20-page short story titled, The Salvador Deli – just in case you needed motivation to take a look at that book). In the six or seven years since, I admit that I have often used the blog to post ‘sneak peeks’ of other upcoming projects. But I always find that I have a desire to get back to writing pithy little humor pieces. I have not included any of the sneak peeks in this collection...only the pithy little humor pieces...
This book also includes one of my earliest comedy screenplays.
In my 20s, while traveling around from my home base of Seattle, performing standup comedy at various comedy clubs around the country, I had this idea that I should eventually make movies. This is a very dangerous idea to get into your head. Movies are expensive to make. Standup comedy only requires that you show up and get the audience laughing. Books only require that you actually WRITE them. Movies – even low budget independent movies – require a nightmare-ish level of organizing, money, good collaborators, and luck.
The idea was in my head, though, and nothing was going to get it out of there. So I wrote a few screenplays. The one included here, Death and Saxophones, is from 1991, or is it 1992? I think I rewrote it in ’92. I sent it to a few Hollywood people at the time. I remember getting one response back from someone. The memory is vague. Anyway, as so often happens with Hollywood, even if there was ‘interest,’ it never went anywhere.
I lived in Hollywood from mid-1993 to mid-1995, but I was mostly there as an actor, and had moved on from Death and Saxophones. I had begun writing an early version of something else, something that did eventually turn into my ACTUAL first independent film (Long Strange Trip – Or The Writer, The Naked Girl, and The Guy with a Hole in His Head – yes, all of that is the title, and as of this writing, you can stream it on Amazon).
Why have I included Death and Saxophones in this collection? Well, maybe part of me plans to always use these once-every-half-dozen-years blog collections to un-earth something old and previously unseen (I have a lot of them). Maybe it is because I had nearly forgotten about the script, and when I re-discovered it recently, it made me laugh. Is it perfect? No. Maybe it even makes for a funnier screenplay than it would an actual movie.
It is important to remember, while reading it, that it is from the early 1990s. It has a reference to Ronald and Nancy Reagan. More than a reference, actually. Ron and Nancy actually show up at a Hollywood party. In 1991, Ronald Reagan was still alive as the recent ex-President. We did not know at the time that he was suffering from Alzheimer’s. After considerable thought, I have decided to leave the scene, rather than cut it. I trust you, the reader, to be able to navigate a 1991 sarcastic moment in its original context.
One last note about Death and Saxophones – A central joke in the story is that a standup comedian is booked by his agent to perform, not at a comedy club, not at any kind of actual comedy show, but at a funeral. It was purely a joke, a joke that allowed other absurd things to happen in the story. Many years later, this turned into a major irony in my life. My dear mother passed away in February 2020. As my siblings and I (there are five of us) emailed each other as a group preparing for the funeral, I shared an old college-newspaper humor column I had once written, about my mother being a master comedienne. The next thing I knew, my sister – who was planning for each of us to say something at the funeral – asked if I would read this funny little thing. I got up at the funeral, started reading, luckily found the right balance between humor and the solemness of the moment, and found myself playing the crowd a little bit. It got laughs. So...yes, many years after this script, I sort of did a little bit of standup comedy at my own mother’s funeral. Fortunately, thankfully, people appreciated it. It could have gone badly. It went well. Strange...but that is all true. That old college piece – A Great Comedienne’s Not So Great Son – is in this collection, because the day after the funeral was blog-post day, and I had nothing to write that day. I posted the old piece that I had read live at the funeral.
Thanks to you the reader, for checking out this collection. As I said, with everything else I do with my creative life, the blog, and the number of readers it has, is a happy bonus. Enjoy!
Peter Wick
June 14, 2024
Tuesday, May 14, 2024
125 - Death and Saxophones; sneak peek #2
Several months ago I put up the first sneak peek of Death and Saxophones. It's an old, unproduced absurdist comedy screenplay, that will live the rest of its life as the bonus section of my new book (the book, of course, is titled, "Death and Saxophones," and will be avaiable Tuesday, May 21). I am pretty sure it will never be put on camera. Hollywood certainly will never touch it. It doesn't follow Hollywood formula.
This time I'm giving you all a little peek at the opening:
EXT. BENSON ESTATE. BEVERLY HILLS. NIGHT
It
is a peaceful, quiet moment in the middle of the night.
The
house is big, Beverly Hills big.
INT.
BEDROOM. NIGHT
Two
people sleep next to each other in a large bed. Both are seventy-ish. They are
Willie and Mitzi Benson.
Suddenly
Willie sits bolt upright. He faces camera but is staring at nothing in
particular. He looks shocked.
WILLIE:
Death!......Saxophones!
And
he lurches to the floor, falling straight left, out of screen. We hear a loud
thud as he hits.
Mitzi
sits up in bed.
MITZI:
Willie? Willie, what is it?
She
switches on the light, sees his feet still on the bed, his head on the floor.
MITZI:
Is this a new yoga thing?
It’s the middle of the night, Willie.
She nudges his feet. They fall to the floor.
MITZI:
Are you dead? Willie, if
you’re dead tap the floor or something.
We
hear a faint but undeniable tapping. Mitzi is a little taken aback.
MITZI:
Tap it three times.
Again
the tapping, this time three distinct times.
She is getting perturbed at the joke now.
MITZI:
Okay, if you’re dead sing “Be
bop-a-loo-la She’s my baby,” in a silly voice.
He
sings like Mickey Mouse.
WILLIE:
Be bop-a-loo-la she’s my baby
– huh – be bop-a-loo-la don’t mean maybe –
Mitzi
goes around the bed, kneels down next to him, rolls him over, puts an ear to
his chest.
MITZI:
I don’t believe you for one
second. I swear, if I hear your heart beating, I’m going to - your heart’s not beating.
She
grabs his wrist and feels for a pulse.
MITZI:
But that’s impossible. You
were singing. I need some sign. Oh, God, if he’s really dead give me a sign.
A BUNCH OF VOICES FROM HEAVEN:
He’s dead, Christ! What do we
have to do? He’s not breathing. He’s finished! Done! Fried! Get a grip, for
crying out loud.
Mitzi
stands up in a huff.
MITZI:
Fine, then, be dead! I find
this very inconsiderate. I guess I better have Winfred do something about it.
She
pushes a button on the wall, then lies back down, shuts off the light.
INT.
THE BUTLER’S BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Winfred
is waking up to the sound of the buzzer.
OPENING
CREDITS
During
credits we see Winfred, who is very old, stumbling, half asleep, from his downstairs
bedroom, across the living room and entrance hall, into a wall or two along the
way, and finally upstairs.
INT.
MITZI’S BEDROOM. CONTINUOUS.
WINFRED:
Yes, sir?
MITZI:
No, Winfred, it’s me. Willie
died. Could you remove his body?
WINFRED:
Right away. Ma’am. Uh, Ma’am,
could you tell me generally, where the body is?
A
loud thud and crash.
WINFRED:
Never mind, Ma’am, I found him.
INT.
HALLWAY. CONTINUOUS.
Winfred
is backing out of Mitzi’s room, pulling Willie’s body by the feet. A door
opens. Marsha, 40-ish, peeks out.
MARSHA:
Winfred, what’s all the noise?
WINFRED:
Your father has died, Miss
Marsha.
MARSHA:
Oh, okay, say, Winfred, have you
ever been to Fiji?
WINFRED:
Fiji?
MARSHA:
It’s an island somewhere in
the ocean, or something. I want to go there. Would you like to come?
WINFRED:
Certainly. I suppose I would.
MARSHA:
Great! Let’s pack.
WINFRED:
Now?
Another
head pops out the door behind Marsha. He is Robert, also 40-ish.
ROBERT:
Hey, Winfred, what’s going on?
WINFRED:
Willie has died, sir.
ROBERT:
No kidding?
MARSHA:
Robert, Winfred said he wants to
go to Fiji too.
WINFRED:
I didn’t really –
ROBERT:
Marsha, I told you, I think
we should wait until morning. I’m beat.
Another
door opens, further down the hall. Alan, 35-ish, appears.
ALAN:
What’s going on out here?
MARSHA:
I want to go to Fiji, and so
does Winfred, but Robert’s being a real pinhead about it, but, you know, I just
feel like going somewhere. Oh, and Daddy died.
ALAN:
What?
MARSHA:
I want to go to Fiji –
ALAN:
No, not that, the part about
Daddy dying.
MARSHA:
Oh, Alan, leave it to you to
dwell on the depressing stuff.
ALAN:
What are you guys doing!?
Winfred, where are you taking him?
WINFRED:
Well…I wasn’t sure…into the
kitchen?
ALAN:
He’s not hungry. He’s dead.
Where’s Mom?
Alan
comes out into the hallway to take over the situation.
WINFRED:
She’s resting.
INT.
BEDROOM. CONTINUOUS.
Alan
opens Mitzi’s door and turns on the light.
ALAN:
Mom! Do you realize Daddy died?
MITZI:
Of course I do.
ALAN:
Well, get up. Let’s do
something. We’ve got to arrange a funeral.
MITZI:
A funeral! Willie hated
funerals!
ALAN:
Well, he must have left some
arrangements. Where’s his will?
MITZI:
Don’t we just put him on the
front porch and call a delivery service to come get him?
ALAN:
Delivery service? I don’t think Dominoes deals in this area.
MITZI:
But this is Beverly Hills.
Surely there must be a service for dead people.
ALAN:
It’s called an ambulance.
Have you called one?
MITZI:
An ambulance! Alan, I’m
starting to wonder if you’re really my son. Let’s call a caterer.
ALAN:
A caterer? A man’s dead, and
all anyone can think about is food!
Peter Wick
May 14, 2024